Robinson Cruseo artwork on a bay opinions please ??

A fellow late Bayer called Steve asked me to come up with some Retro graphics for his green Bay, wanted to do a Robinson Cruseo theme to match plans for his interior, opinions please ?




Carl

 

the first one is a better colour match to the bus , the second is better grapically

 

Agree,,swap colors

 

Thanks guys.
I like the font on the second one. Like the palm trees, nice touch. Maybe it needs a lighter contrasting background (cream?) to pull out the design from the bus?
Maybe the font from the 2nd one, layout of the first one, avoid any green in the design, cream background, maybe pinstriped edge to the oval..
(or something else ^-^ )

Thanks for this Carl

S

 

Thanks, it's getting there, hole in the road I keep barrowing money I don't really have into (like most of us!).
I must introduce myself sometime >

Cheers
s

 

First one

 

top one but change the font - looking good tho O0

 

Had a split for a short time many years back. Got burnt on it, kingpin wear taken up with 4 inch nails hammered in, sawn off and covered in grease! that was 26 years ago! Wish I had it now though. Could sell it an buy another couple of bays

Oops, when you said 'first one' I thought you meant '1st bus' what a doofus i am )

 

first one with the font of the second on 8)

 

First one imho

 

Thanks for feedback guys, seems to be a theme of ist one with 2nd font, which i can relate too, I will add a revised version later today .

Cheers Carl

 

Ok here are another 3 taking into consideration feedback from first two!, Personally I quite like the Burnt orange (but i am biased all my signage & van is orange lol) i think it contrasts nicely with the van colour, the green i think is the more tastefull discreet option, and the cream background which also works well to my eyes, not sure if the Robinson Cruseo's text looks better curved around outer edge or straight through middle, probably the cream/light beige version looking at it again but opinions invited ?

 

Number 2 gets my vote mate.

 

No.2 gets my vote

what colour green is that???? 8)

 

That's a Vw velvet green, common on the splits. Can't remember the code.

I agree, 2 is xcelent. All it needs now is a tweak on the lettering onside the oval (should 'beach' be dropped to bring the ampersand up? Size, colour, shadow?)

Top stuff Carl!

 

Code for velvet green is L512
Cheers
S

 

Number two,,spot on